I said it before and I'll say it again,I loved this review and it's pretty much spot on with everything I can currently see wrong with it myself.
And I think that is the main problem I've had is just not finishing the story arcs. I will admit that the stories are random and don't end, aside from Dinner Plans, and the April Fools arc in the newest incarnation of the comic. When Sasha went to spend the night at D'shea's house, that is actually a legit thing, so it's not like it "didn't happen" just for the sake of the April Fools joke. What happened in that arc is canon, including the dream that D'shea had.
Overall though, each story arc without an ending WILL have an ending recap of some kind, of at least to show some level of closure. I'm talking all the way back to the first pages of the comic when it first hit the internet. So I hope that nobody thinks that the random stories don't count in the character histories, because they do. What's happened in the comic has happened and affects the characters views of each other etc. The transition from the old archive to the new comics isn't some alternate dimension, it really is a single continuous storyline, and it is disjointed I think only because of that lack of closure. Something I take full responsibility for.
In fact, let me explain the planning process for each arc so far...
The opening story, about the band and all that.
I was really wanting to make a comic of my creations, so I slapped it together. At least the opening. The characters were made with the help of some friends for input, and then I ran with it. I had some unspoken plans on how it would end, but one thing that struck me about halfway through (a drawback to not planning things) was that it was so like Saved by the Bell that I actually broke my brain and felt ashamed of it. So instead of showing them in a garage like I initially wanted to practicing their songs, and the idea actually going anywhere, I ditched that and went with a pseudo closure to it that was, in the end, really lame and just seemed to peter off into nothing. What happened with the band? The story arc coming up called "Innocence Lost" (working title) actually has some recap explanation, if at least briefly. This will help with some amount of closure and I hope answer a lot of questions people have had regarding "What happened to the band?" and "What happened to Rhi?"
I could blame being a total amateur without a plan, but when I've done it multiple times that excuse works only once.
No matter how you cut it, aside from a few details and story flow, what happened in that arc actually happened. (I have it in mind to even go back and do a revisit and reupload, with more details and more of a precise storyline and a better ending. There would be minimal ret-con, and in fact I would keep the same flow and everything, I would just detail it better because I actually disdain true ret-cons and hate cancelling what's already been established)
Of all things, I will round out the rumors that were going on and make it a little more dramatic, while keeping a high amount of funny. I've not even touched it with a notepad yet, so this is all speculation on what I should probably do....
The Scrunchy
I find myself enjoying the element that the scrunchy brings to the comic. I won't say much more on that specifically, but I will say this: We've not seen the end of it, and neither has Sasha. There are so many blatant tv tropes about this aspect that I honestly feel ashamed of it, but I would consider it a guilty pleasure and an excuse to add a very weird, mysterious element to the comic, and yes I do have it connected to things in the future of the comic. So don't think it's as random as it may seem.
But it's creation was in fact very random. The scrunchy creation came from the conversation of an acquaintance who noticed a wad of hair someone left on the shower wall after washing their hair. (Long hair does that, for those of you that don't know) and he said "That was scary. I was half expecting it to start talking to me." The idea was hilarious at the time, and so thoughts on incorporating it into the comic were rampant. It went from a hair wad (ew gross) to something left in the fridge too long (also ew gross. And Doris, Sasha's mom, wouldn't let things get that bad) so I settled on the yellow louffa as Agent Smith.
In the comic world, I do have a reason for it's existence and WHY it's talking. Yes, there is stuff that will explain it. (tv tropes, tv tropes, tv tropes) Just have to give it time. That's all I'm saying on it.
The Sleep Over
This one was a really fun idea that had the same kind of problem as the first story. I feel it was an awesome start that pretty much established the M.O. to the comic itself. Boredom makes people do weird things. (hence the current Ruler of the World story) But I try to keep a more innocent side to it, because I grew up in a very small southern Arkansas town of 2500 people, and there were only three things to do there as a teenager in the 1980's: Get drunk. Hunt deer. Or get pregnant.
Anyway, so the sleep over started as this great idea that I ran by my friends and they gave the thumbs up. We came up with a lot of corny scenes that needed to be included, but overall there was no real.. reason to it. It had a beginning, it had a lot of content for the middle, but there wasn't really anything that would end it. Nothing to tie it together into an episode. Poor planning once again was the bane of my existence. By the time I was updating the last pages to it, I wanted it done. I was struggling as things went on to get more ideas, get the layouts and make it work that I just chickened out. But I did it in a way that helped introduce a power (at the time) that T had, which was that she acted like she was in a comic book (hence why she was one of only character to break the 4th wall and speak to ME the author. It also helped clash with Jo at the time, who always thought she was in a movie (and the reason why she was the only one who broke the 4th wall that spoke to the AUDIENCE). So the ending rant to that was fitting but also horrible and a copout to boot.
I tagged on a bit more to close it up, but it was really lame.
After it was over with, I swept it under the rug and walked away ashamed once again and covered up with a few random one-shot comics that randomly helped with character development that was sincerely needed such as Ruth and Boo meeting for the first time at the library, and a bit more on how Sash and T tend to usually get along, and a bit about CC's family. I was trying to just move along. I don't think it helped that criticism at the time wasn't all that prevalent, and only now years later do people look at it and scoff but don't really take into account that I am trying, so the criticism comes from a place of total ignorance. Referring once again to this review as very considerate in the criticism.
Nemesis (aka The Ren Faire arc)
This one had some amount of planning. A beginning, middle and end. It was my first stab at a fully planned arc.. well.. okay not fully planned. I had an ending, I had totally thought up and ending (which we will see.. about 3 stories from now. yes, a while but I think it's worth it!), the problem with it was that during that time I had a lot of personal life problems taking place. That's neither here nor there.
The main thing is I felt I was doing really good but when the shit started hitting the fan I had to refocus a lot of my efforts elsewhere in life.
I think the Nemesis story for as long as it lasts speaks for itself. I'm still very sorry and ashamed that I let it fall into a non-ending obscurity as it did, but this is why I want to give it a HUGE influence in later arcs so that it can be fully closed right and proper. And like the first story, I may revisit it. Nemesis of all of them I want to "redo" with my updated artistic ability and at the very least end it properly without fading into guest strips and random stuff not even associating with the comic. I actually can't stand going back to look at those, I'm embarrassed! It's an eyesore. And this is why it is all classified as "old comic".
All that stuff happened, but that was "two years ago" in comic time. From the old comic to the new front page incarnation, it has been two years. The characters have grown a little bit, but not too much, as kuvvies age slower and mature slower than humans. This is why I've taken to adding 'in world' dates and times to things that happened. Such as the start of the Dinner Plans arc...
"Troublemaker"
A lot of personal life crap went down and so I tried to move the comic to a different setting, something more fantastical. I fell prey to poor planning once again, relying on key scenes to make but no interconnection other than a more massive over-arcing plot that when seen frmo the individual story arc's perspective looks horrible and disjointed. This is where I agree with Centaur71 here. I have HUGE plans, and in retrospect, a lot of the tidbits of random info will come in handy after all is said and done. It just makes for a lot of really crappy "Well right now it seems kind of random" perspectives to take place.]
What will come of Troublemaker? Right now it's on the backburner indefinitely. I do have a way of making it work with the comic, but for now it's simply a filler. It's key, but also yet again is something I am ashamed I started without finishing. My apologies once again. Tick another notch against me there in my ability to finish something.
The new comic..
So, if you assume the characters had their adventures, with sleep overs and ren faires and bands and things, we move to two years later in their lives...
I had a lot of re-establishing to do, and once again only had a vague idea of a plan. Sasha is still silly in school, Ruth is still strict and hardcore, introducing D'shea to face off against Ruth, with Jo finally getting her driver's license, and a bit more interaction with T and Sasha to top it all off. Boo and CC are in the background right now, but that will eventually change. I did try to touch a bit more on the ren faire, at least from the perspective of Sasha and T. The perspective of the others will come in due time...
Polygon Tatas are Still Tatas
This arc was for one main reason. To show that in the time that's passed, D'shea and Sasha have become seriously good friends. That was the main focus of this arc. And to be honest I think I did a good job of it. The April Fool's joke just came at the right time and I had to do it. (in case you weren't there for it, I had finished the "GOTCHA" page ahead of time, and then did a livestream showing the next pages where Sasha and D'shea were naked in front of the TV actually having sex. I got done with the base linework and then 'called it a night', only to update on the 1st with the "HAHA GOTCHA" page. People have been gun shy ever since and I'm really proud of that) unfortuantely people without a sense of humour like those over at the Bad Webcomics Wiki couldn't wrap their brain around it. I just chalk it up to bitterness that they didn't get to see the characters bumping uglies. Yes, I'm pulling the "You're just jealous" card, but not in malice. I would rather folks just chilled out and went with it instead of picking on it. Sure, in the flow of things and in afterthought it's an eyesore of a page to add, but the story arc is still solid. In fact, if you remove the "HAHA GOTCHA" page, it ALMOST works as a continuous comic, showing that D'shea has this way of ordering his mind that may have a hiccup now and again, and the awkward way that he views Sasha.
And the cameo of Jo in one spot actually indicates that Sasha's girliness isn't overlooked, but at the very least is accepted.
Either way, it's all canon and not some random thing to be ignored. D'shea did dream that, and Sasha did go "What.. the.. HELL?" at the end.
Dinner Plans
This one I planned for. While I was doing the story between Sasha and D'shea, and even before then, I was plotting out Dinner Plans. This one I'm really proud of. (Sure the schedule went awry shortly after it started, but the last page update on June 6th, 2011 should explain a lot)) I feel that in the middle the dialogue gets clumsy and contrived, and even a bit shallow between the adults and the job talk. But I would say that's how parties are like that. A lot of superficial postering and conversations just to pass the time and communicate jovially.
Your comments on the spotlight on Ruth with only a dash of Sasha there as a foil is exactly my plan. I didn't want him to overtake the scenes, and I'm glad someone noticed this. I wanted to show their interactions uninhibited by school and others their age, where certain courages ventures in conversation can take place without the thought of someone there interrupting.
I also wanted to set up a LOT of stuff involving parent/kid interactions. I hope that I conveyed the relationship that Ruth and Tesserly have, where it's a very respectful give and take kind of thing, where they know their part and role and do what they can to support each other without pushing buttons too much. And I can't wait to explore that more in the comic. And believe me, I will. And on the side, I threw in the rather ditzy relation Sasha has with his rather quirky, perky parents.
Dinner Plans is the product of me saying I've had enough of this no-ending bullcrap. I wanted to start telling stories and I will commit to doing it. And so far I've had little to no complaints about it. Well.. okay other than "OMG SASHA LOK LIKE A GURL! BAWW!" (sorry, I still laugh at that)
Ruler of the World
Just like the Polygon Tatas arc, this one is filler while I work on much larger things in the future. It's easy, it's fun, and really it is a chance for readers to just lighten up and have fun with the characters. I can't say much more, because it's just that simple. And depending on how long it takes for me to finish editing and start working on the comic pages, I may go for more face-offs with other characters in the meantime.
So for this one, sit back, relax, and even get involved as you can help guide Boo's actions and possibly lead her to victory!
Anyway, that's been my side of it all. I left out a lot of personal stuff, what's happened in my life and what I've gone through in regards to life changing events, but I will admit that they also played a factor in update schedules and my desire to drop story arcs. But that still doesn't excuse poor planning of overall stories. Something I am remedying.
Oy, that was a lot... Um.. I'm going to go draw now... Thanks a bunch.
And yes, I would proudly say "You ain't seen nothing yet" and endorse this fully.