Author Topic: Destiny’s Path  (Read 4881 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline lyfibringer

  • Elder Kuvrahk
  • ****
  • Posts: 984
  • Karma: 21
  • Gender: Female
  • Chances are, I love you.
    • Lyfi Universe
Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #15 on: December 09, 2012, 07:01:40 PM »
Quote
My spelling corrector disagrees.   :lol:

    After a while, it just all blurs together and becomes a beautiful red smudge! Yeah, I'm well versed with that with all the weird talkin' all da people do in ma place. Just keep it up and trying to improve!

Altermeta Community

Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #15 on: December 09, 2012, 07:01:40 PM »

Offline Dreaker

  • Dragon
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,988
  • Karma: 20
  • Gender: Male
  • He who lurks around
Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #16 on: December 29, 2012, 02:25:28 PM »
Here we go again.

Now you can read it on Google Docs!

Wasn't planed like this but a didn't want to wast a perfectly good cliffhanger don't you agree?
« Last Edit: April 15, 2018, 10:09:28 AM by Dreaker »
Secret activity in process. Please look elsewhere.

Offline Dreaker

  • Dragon
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,988
  • Karma: 20
  • Gender: Male
  • He who lurks around
Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #17 on: April 04, 2013, 12:36:46 PM »
« Last Edit: April 15, 2018, 10:09:46 AM by Dreaker »
Secret activity in process. Please look elsewhere.

Offline Dreaker

  • Dragon
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,988
  • Karma: 20
  • Gender: Male
  • He who lurks around
Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #18 on: April 15, 2018, 10:14:06 AM »
The story did not moved forward but it changed so much and got expanded here and there.

Now you can read it on Google Docs!
Secret activity in process. Please look elsewhere.

Offline Wraa

  • Dragon
  • *****
  • Posts: 2,210
  • Karma: 21
  • Gender: Male
  • Your trusted friend in Science
Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #19 on: April 16, 2018, 03:12:31 PM »
I will have to give it a fresh read!
"You don't wheedle the god of the Dragons, even if he is your father."

Offline Dreaker

  • Dragon
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,988
  • Karma: 20
  • Gender: Male
  • He who lurks around
Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #20 on: April 16, 2018, 06:50:19 PM »
Most appreciated.

Hope you don't disappear like the last guy who said that.
Secret activity in process. Please look elsewhere.

Offline Wraa

  • Dragon
  • *****
  • Posts: 2,210
  • Karma: 21
  • Gender: Male
  • Your trusted friend in Science
Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #21 on: April 16, 2018, 10:51:06 PM »
Do you want any grammar or spelling suggestions made along the way?
"You don't wheedle the god of the Dragons, even if he is your father."

Offline Dreaker

  • Dragon
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,988
  • Karma: 20
  • Gender: Male
  • He who lurks around
Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #22 on: April 17, 2018, 05:27:22 AM »
I would be grateful for it.
Secret activity in process. Please look elsewhere.

Offline Wraa

  • Dragon
  • *****
  • Posts: 2,210
  • Karma: 21
  • Gender: Male
  • Your trusted friend in Science
Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #23 on: April 18, 2018, 05:41:56 PM »
Read through, suggestions offered, and reviewed!
"You don't wheedle the god of the Dragons, even if he is your father."

Offline Dreaker

  • Dragon
  • *****
  • Posts: 1,988
  • Karma: 20
  • Gender: Male
  • He who lurks around
Re: Destiny’s Path
« Reply #24 on: April 18, 2018, 07:45:42 PM »
Suggestions considered and applied and very grateful for them.
Secret activity in process. Please look elsewhere.