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Thief’s Blood
« on: November 28, 2013, 03:10:21 PM »
Hey there. So I got stuck with Destiny’s Path while in the same time an old story of mine started to dug itself into my mind. So I decided doodle with it. There will be three episodes.
The base idea not that original since. Furries in spaces. Yeah lets see how it works out.

Thief’s Blood I.
Bridge of Chains


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Re: Thief’s Blood
« Reply #1 on: November 29, 2013, 08:18:04 PM »
Dreaker, I think it is off to a good start. There are a few grammar and spelling odds and ends that could use a little tidying up, but I suspect that may be translation based. It is interesting and I look forward to reading more!
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« Reply #2 on: November 30, 2013, 06:22:11 AM »
There are a few grammar and spelling odds and ends that could use a little tidying up, but I suspect that may be translation based.
Believe or not my English grammar is far better then my Hungarian. (Also thx for the reading)

Oh I forgot something important to mention about the znokar. They are kind of a mix between hive mind creatures and single entities. In there language the basic form of words are the plural and use Suffixes (-at -et -it -ot -ut depending what was the last vowel in the word) for singulars. Example zai means two or more weapons and zaiit mean a singel one weapon.
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« Reply #3 on: February 23, 2014, 04:30:34 PM »
I planed the post this chapters in two updates but since it seems this part won't change I decided to post it.

Thief’s Blood II.
Torn Shadows


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Re: Thief’s Blood
« Reply #4 on: February 28, 2014, 06:00:33 PM »
Let's keep going.

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« Reply #6 on: January 31, 2015, 05:08:55 PM »
Thief’s Blood III.
Fate and Chance


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« Reply #7 on: March 14, 2015, 03:00:26 AM »
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Re: Thief’s Blood
« Reply #8 on: July 25, 2017, 01:12:31 PM »
Well. Been a while. In that time I continued this story but mostly patched up thing. Replaced temporary names with the final ones. I updated previous posts. Also the story got a new structure. tl;dr: Better start at the beginning.

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That's all for now. One more chapter to go.
Thanks for the reading.
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Re: Thief’s Blood
« Reply #9 on: April 15, 2018, 09:24:48 AM »
Time went by and I kept writing. Still not finished.

Thief’s Blood III.
Fate and Chance


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